Random Writing

Just some writing

Under my skin 

And in my veins

you cause me

a good kind of pain

Words you speak

They entice me so

watching you pace around

You’re quite the show

When I look at you 

 I see a future

Don’t care if it’s difficult

You’ve become my suture

I might ask myself

What the f**k I’m doing

Although I can’t stop 

You’re something I’m pursuing

To keep you as mine

That is my aim

I want to be around

And not be just a game

Reviews

[Stephen]

Yeah, I`ve just read your that write "Sweetheart" a few couple of seconds earlier. I can now understand the concept of this write .. this`s seemed a IInd part that write. Well written but it`s appeared that you`re a bit confused about love ..may be, yet you ain`t sure, what you all gotta do ... isn`t it? It`s reflecting through your pieces, Nikki. Anyway .. All the best for your life and your upcoming stuffs! Your very good at writing so, keep on!!

[Chris Micha]

Men love a challenge and when that challenge is conquered, they tend to move on.

That being said, there are quit a few guys out here that want (one) girl and nothing more. To them they are the universe their world revolves in. I know because I am one.

Hopefully, he turns out to be one of them.

Another good piece!

[Hector Reyes]

I like this lol
It sounds real like your not looking for a game
Your looking for something real
I respect that