Morals

 

What happened to morals?

Where did principles disappear off too?

Instead of listening to old ghosts

Drop your weapons and testaments

Look inside and feel the aroma

The aroma of your heart

 

Instead of looking at diamonds

And buying gems

Instead of praising possessions

Put down that piece of paper

And take a walk in the forest

 

False-prophets and old ghost

Are just symbols in a false dream

Feeding venomous words to poor new minds

I know If we worked hard enough

We can put all of that to the side and smile

Author's Note

The world we live in, can be so much better and happier, If we put our hearts up to the test.

Reviews

[Dusty]

I finally got to critting this, lol.
The poem is very good, but somehow it leaves something to be desired. It is rather empty, without much emotion. It brings up some very good points, but is hardly personal or an amazing experience. Make this poem packed with so much image and metaphor that it bursts at the seams and haunts peoples minds as they sleep. That is what is has the potential to do. Keep writing! =)

[Morals Ference2nd]

Thanks for the refreshing message My writing name is Morals Ference

[Legion]

Convincing others of that is the true test. Great sentiment though. Couldn't agree more.