S.O.S

I just can't take it anymore....

Dizzy
I can't breathe
Something is wrong
VERY
Need to figure it out
But its getting harder
To wake up
To move
To live
S.O.S
Can someone help me
I'm spinning
Crashing
This can't continue
I won't survive it
So weak
Falling fast
Somebody catch me
ANYBODY!
PLEASE!!
HELP ME!!!

Reviews

[Dream Weaver]

This is well done...Written in true poetic form.
Very clever the enlarging the last three lines.
Nicely done for sure.