Beating

To the wind

I float

From place to place

Not going

Where I want

My love is dying 

Heart slowly beating

Author's Note

Part 2. Link to part 3: http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Catlady/542632/
Inspired by: To the wind
Finished:4-28-10

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

that was a breath of fresh air

[Coyote Poetry]

in a few words. You said a complete poem. The heart can't take a lot. Sometime time is the only healer. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[deeps]

I love this write here.
This is so elegant and so well written.
I enjoyed reading this write alot.

100/100