Rain and a greater miracle

a nature write and a MIRACLE write

The Rain Descends from Heavens Sky
Upon the waiting thistly Ground
tears Cascade from God's Weeping Eyes
and we do see it all around
o will it flood? God Only Knows
For he does wear that kind of Crown
In August, He can make it snow.
A Miracle, in This old town

Were Summer snow to fall this year
upon the earth so dry and brown.
I wonder waves of shock and fear
to well up in Savannah town.
GLOBAL WARMING, is all you'd hear
for miles and miles and miles around.
But Miracle, God's Snowy Tears
in August in Savannah Town.

 

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written in canzonetta foremat

 
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The Canzonetta

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Canzonetta

 

http://www.reference.com/browse/wiki/Canzonetta

The canzonetta is structured as follows:
 
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and so on.

 

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Reviews

[imm's place]

love the format and one of your masterpieces lewis. well done, mary

[doreen cyr]

great write bro
doreen

[SamBug]

great job

[Legion]

How interesting. Snow in August. :) I like it. May have to try one in this form myself.

[T]

Thank goodness we're having breezy conditions or I'd be praying for relief too ... Wonderfully written bud! hugs

[Mysty Rayn]

Very beautiful. Thank you for asking me to read it.