Pain Is....

Pain is...

A heart filled with distrust,

A mind filled with consciousness,

A soul filled with emptiness,

Desires unfulfilled,

Thoughts unwritten,

Places unexplored,

Lyrics unsung and

Love unspoken.

 

Reviews

[Michelle Rachel]

Been there, beautifully written.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you!

[Avinash]

A very true definition of pain.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you ^_^

[Pete]

Every word true. Great observations and well written. Very deep and thought-provoking. Good job.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :D

[aLittlePain]

Powerful simply stated truth. Regards Ray

[iamshadowine]

Thank you Ray :D

[SZHZIA]

Nice definition of pain you have given in so simple words. I really like and enjoy it. The last two words are so inspiring and directly relate to my past life. Nice job. Keep writing. Thanks for sharing. :-)

Best
Szhzia

[Elizabeth J. Gelinger]

Great write, short and simple and yet so full of meaning. Pain is everything that could be but never was, Keep writing.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you so very much

[Marcus Sergiu David]

Great, simple read. The 3rd and the 4th lines really got me thinking. Good job!

[iamshadowine]

Thank you very much

[prettybretty]

this is how i feel every day of my life. you describe this universally and with experience. Shadowine, you are so powerful and effortless. please remember that and use it to your advantage;) you possess impressive wisdom and strength.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you so much :D

[Jamestown]

Wisdom in these words.
I couldn't have said it better myself,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :)

[Carolynn]

yes this would certainly depict pain in a very real way - I think the most powerful point is the last one - good way to end this very well written poem :)

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :)