I wish I could

I WISH I COULD COMPOSE A SONG,

WHOSE LYRICS WOULD BE APPRECIATED

I WISH I COULD DANCE,

SO EVERYONE COULD FEEL MY BEAT.

I WISH I COULD SING,

SO AS TO MAKE PEOPLE FEEL

I WISH I COULD JOKE,

TO AT LEAST MAKE SOMEONE HAPPY

I WISH I COULD WRITE,

TO MAKE PEOPLE ENJOY

I WISH I COULD INSPIRE,

TO BRING ABOUT CHANGE IN A LIFE

OH! I WISH I COULD,

BUT WOULDN’T,

BECAUSE I AM A DEAD SOUL LIVING INSIDE AN ALIVE BODY.

 

 

Reviews

[Diamond Dunbar]

I wish I could do the same! I wish I didn't hoarder so much pain. I wish that everyday it would rain. I wish that one day I don't have to feel insane. I wish that I could meet you and we could write poems in chains. I truly do enjoy your writings my dear!

[iamshadowine]

thank you so much! :D

[Marcus Sergiu David]

All those wishes we all have... A sad ending, but wonderful poem. Loved it :)

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :D

[Cassie]

So long as you are alive, you can bring change.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you for your review :)

[SZHZIA]

Wonderful writing!
We really do what you have mentioned in this poem, you drew our attention to the purpose of our doing. The ending of this poem is so interesting." BUT WOULDN’T,
BECAUSE I AM A DEAD SOUL LIVING INSIDE AN ALIVE BODY." IT is true. Keep writing, nice job. Thanks for sharing.

Best
Szhzia

[iamshadowine]

Thanks a lot :)

[SZHZIA]

You are welcome.

[zaisham9393]

Now this is amazing Shadowine :)!All we can do is to try to bring smile on someone's face but we cannot please everybody...there will always be someone who would want to bring others down...
This was Very well written and relatable in some way !
Thanks for sharing :)!

[iamshadowine]

Thank you so much :)

[Jon Roggie]

All it takes is a spark. The soul never dies. Just grows tired, and silent.

[iamshadowine]

thank you for your review :))

[Rebecca Leigh]

Interesting concept, I am sure you do make a difference in this life for others.

[iamshadowine]

thank you :D

[Shabeeh Haider]

Oh..... this poem started with so much life and rhythm but the end is indeed very sad.
Beautifully expressed.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you so much :)

[Emily]

I really like this!
I like how it started off kind of happy, then it kind of turned dark.
Love it!
Keep on writing!!

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :)

[andrew mitchell]

A sad write, melancholic, a feeling of low self esteem arises from this write. Don't be too hard on yourself, be who you, you are unique, being anybody else is just a cheap imitation.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :)

[Raylene]

Amazing poem I think we all wish we could master the arts. I personally want to play the guitar.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you ^_^