Stroll

Going for a stroll outside,

Under the dark sky,

Leaving my footprints on,

But I know tomorrow,

They’ll be gone

Reviews

[Dr. YumnaKay]

"But I know tomorrow,
They’ll be gone"

So true! This is short but very deep! I liked reading this 😊

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :D

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome 😊

[Jackie]

Beautiful. And very true. Thanks for sharing:-)

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :D

[BlakHeart]

the message is so clear, the words are just perfect, thank you for sharing this poem

[iamshadowine]

Thank you very much :)

[Joshua Haines]

Reading this poem. I can see you have great talent

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :)

[Tony Jordan]

This recalled the poem - 'Footprints in the Sand' - a religious/spiritual poem.
This was more philosophical but equally as good.
:)

[iamshadowine]

thank you! :D

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Wow! Vividly placed!
It points to the temporary nature of human life.
Well done!!

[iamshadowine]

Thanks ^_^

[Farhan Shaikh]

Strong words u have Inside yourself..

[iamshadowine]

Thank you! Also your dp❤

[Farhan Shaikh]

Hehe thank you

[Michelle Rachel]

Never take the chance to make a change in the world for granted, never. I did, and I wasted a lot of the time that could've been spent changing things that bothered me personally. You have NO clue the impact you have on people, me especially. Reading your writing has been such a blessing, and it really sticks with me...I love your writing...Don't stop, ever..

[iamshadowine]

Thank you do much! It means a lot honestly :D