All I see is what my love has done

All I see is what my love has done

A Poem by Roo Miljan
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It was never real but for me it was

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My love for you swells: it's overwhelming
Omniscient
Overpowering
Yes, I admit, it's useless
For me, for you, for our inescapable demise
It overtakes my vision like bleeding eyes
Covering every shade until all I see is that deep red.

It trickles out: down my cheeks like tears
Treacherous
Tough
If, figuratively, it stained my lips
Would I, would you, would all who looked on
Notice it was my bleeding and suffering all in one
Or see it as a statement
Of my love

© 2019 Roo Miljan


Author's Note

Roo Miljan
Thought I should start writing poetry to express myself heh....

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Well if this is your first attempt at writing poetry to express yourself, I would say you've got off to a good start. All good wishes.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Added on January 18, 2019
Last Updated on February 6, 2019
Tags: romance, Love, poetry, enjambment, heartbreak

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Roo Miljan
Roo Miljan

United Kingdom



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Hello! I don't write much but im trying to do more!Hope you like it... more..

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