The Secret Goldfish (Original)A Story by jyn.niThis was a short prompt that was written for school based on the vague title "The Secret Goldfish" mentioned in "The Catcher In The Rye".The Egress opened in a blaze of sapphire, cerulean, teal, and aegean. An electric pulse emitted from its edges, tickling the space around it. There was a whooshing sound, as if air was being sucked into the Egress like a vacuum. Ezekiel was wearing his work shirt with his name embroidered on the front, bolding labeling him. His jeans were tucked into his boots and a red bandana hung from his back pocket. Long, dark hair was pulled back into a bun and his beard was like a jungle on his jaw. As he looked at his Mordecai, he felt a strong sense of pride. Seven years had passed since the first time. Ezekiel had brought his son back so many souvenirs but not one day did his smile ever compare to the day when he had came home and told Mordecai that he thought it was about time he took his son along. “You can never take anything from our adventures. Okay, Mordecai?” The little boy’s head bobbed up and down, his face glowing with excitement. Ezekiel stood from his kneel and ruffled Mordecai’s dark ringlets. Mordecai had waited for this moment since he had been four years old. He watched his father press the small, emerald button. A hum filled the room and in the open space the Egress started to form. A ball of admiral started to stretch into a disk and soon the sapphire, cerulean, teal, and augean had appeared. The bronze sparks spread like spiderwebs as they clawed at the air around the Egress. It looked as if roots were burying into soil. The hum had grown louder and was now accompanied by a whooshing sound, as if there were a large vacuum. Mordecai looked back at his father, a look of questioning glimmering in his eyes. “Go ahead”, his father urged. Mordecai reached out a hand and could feel the electricity grappling onto him like thin, invisible tentacles. He looked back at his father once more and was given a nod. Mordecai looked into the eye of the Egress and felt anxiousness cloak him as he stared into the unknown. Mordecai pulled his hand away and took a few steps back. He closed his eyes and listened to the humming it emitted. Deep within the harmony, he could hear an undertone of chimes. “Dive left, Mordy!” Mordecai looked up and saw his father falling just above him head first. Mordecai dove left and felt the iciness wash over him. He was surrounded by warm colors that swirled around him as he tumbled. The smell of fresh air and a faint hint of vanilla tickled his senses. When he stopped tumbling, he lay on his back for a moment. The sky was a brilliant arctic with accents of stone. Lavender clouds dotted the sky as did twinkling silver stars. No sun nor moon hung in the sky which made him wonder where the light source was. The ground below Mordecai was a deep chocolate color but had the consistency of sand. As he sat up, he saw tufts of salmon, rogue, and punch on top of long, thin trunks. Were they supposed to be trees? Ponds of rose water were prominent in the odd sand, as consistent as puddles after rain. Mordecai stood and stumbled over to one of the ponds. Creatures of many colors (orange, gold, silver, black, maroon, navy) swam within the water peacefully. Each creature looked nothing like what Mordecai had seen before. Or at least each except one. © 2018 jyn.ni |
StatsAuthorjyn.niCAAboutI've been writing since I could, in the most literal sense imaginable. Even before I could write, I would make up stories and tell them to anyone who would listen. Story telling is who I am :) more..Writing
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