No Type

Title says it all

I’m not any type
I live life like the way I like
Cause I know it’s just me in the lonely night
Trying to find solace in my mind

I had a dream of becoming cool
So for that I went to a school
That taught me how to be idealistic
And make this human race just holy fool

With my intelligence and with my vision
That glister anytime when I fight
In my own world with my own rhythm
Makes me want to own this ride

Of bumpy emotions and painful lies
Of scary demons and wild cries
Of my nerves which live inside my head all the time
Makes me want to live cautiously with elegance and style

I’m not hateful
I just pretend to be rude
Don’t judge me by saying I’m just aloof
In fact, I’m trying to be attractive by staying eccentric and exactitude

To all those who never try to understand me
And the ones who wants me to be like them
But I’ll try my best not to change myself like the way I am
As they’ll be seeing me conquering something  because of the way I am

In the near future when I’ll have no time to hate people who hate me
As they might forget me
I’ll be happy that few now criticize me
Dealing with my ego will be easier as few will now intimidate me

Author's Note

This isn't what I have put a lot of effort into. It's just a simple piece of representation of oneself in words. Hope you guys would be interested in leaving a feedback after giving this a read maybe? ;)

Reviews

[Vatsal Rohilla (account..]

Well the theme is nice and the message has been brought out clearly. But this poem of yours needs a lot of brushing up-
1. Second line- "I live life the way I like" and not "I live life like the way I like"
2. Third stanza, first line- "With my intelligence and (my) vision" and not "With my intelligence and with my vision"
3. Rephrase the last line of your fifth stanza- "by staying eccentric and exactitude" - eccentric is okay bu exactitude has not been used correctly because it is a noun....replace it with a suitable adjective.
4. Sixth stanza, second line- "And the ones who want (not "wants") me to be like them"
5. Sixth stanza, third line- Delete "like the way I am"
6. Last stanza, third and fourth lines- Delete "now" from both of them

Well, that is all, I think, you must edit. This would enhance your poem. Lovely, but small errors are a setback. You have potential, you can improve, keep writing.