Just A Name

A Poem by Texas Identitycrisis

Something I can see
something to stare at

Only as close
as a name [Smiles]
To know you're alive
and not to forget

That energy made
winds change direction
So far off and yet so present

The joy and pain
of knowing some people
Weird, the connections
you make, stay with you

Something I can see
something to stare at

© 2008 Texas Identitycrisis

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Mariah

I like it better the second time, although I thought it was exceptional to begin with. Sometimes I rework my stuff too- sometimes it doesn't work out, but sometimes IT DOES. ;)

Posted 16 Years Ago

Mariah

Hmm....*contemplates the possible underlying messages*

I'm not exactly sure what this one means to me yet. I'll have to think awhile.

'Your energy makes
the wind change direction
So far off and yet so present '

Posted 16 Years Ago

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Added on May 23, 2008
Last Updated on June 5, 2008

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Texas Identitycrisis

Behind that Pine Curtain, TX

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