Transparency

from ‘The Elements’

 

In my transparent dreams

it doesn't cost me anything

to turn to dirigible out of flute

and backward, or, for instance

become a tiny seed of a dandelion

with fluffy white umbrella on my head

and  fly away to Fiji... But

the most exciting thing  for me is

become irrepressible wind:

it flies anywhere it wants

because it possesses freedom.

So I often turn into the wind

in my transparent dreams.

 

 

Reviews

[Mockingbird]

this is very zen-like. being one or becoming the elements. you must have a raised consciousness to be able to control your dreams. this poem empathizes freedom and it is inspiring and uplifting.

[Nona]

so beautiful! all the imagery is attention grabbing and colorful. Great!!!

[Benyoucef]

Lovely poem, but you could've made it longer and deeper, and don't explain to the writer, it's better if they make out their own explanations