The wrong destination

from ‘The Placebo Effect’

 

IF YOU CAME TO THIS PLACE

IN SEARCH OF YOURSELF

YOU HAVE OBVIOUSLY

CONFUSED THE ADDRESS

as YOUR SOUL BELONGS

 TO ANOTHER WORLD.

Reviews

[Belle]

Another favorite from you!
I felt the rejection. It just successfully created a frustrating mood.

[Marie]

Okay, this is better.

[The Dead Poet]

This somehow reminds me of this line from The Crow : City of Angels.

"Life is just a dream on the way to death."

[Marie]

Beautiful as always. And meaningful. But the abbreviated "because" ('Cause) does not seem to fit the poem. Can you do something else with this line?

[J.J. NIGHTINGALE]

So True ... Well said ..

Jasmine ..