My Love For You

My Love For You

A Poem by WynterInspired

(Verse 1)

Yeah

I was thinking well i was in at home

Why you would just desert me anywhere

Like you've did once before

You promised me you wouldn't do it again

 

(Hook)

I'm walking out the door this time

You ask me for a second chance

But your not getting it, Noo oh oh oh ohhh

Cos i'm not letting you back in to my life

 

(Chorus)

Yeah, You pretty much fucked up what we had

Now my heart is Shattered & Broken

My love for you is now gone

Your love wasn't right, it was wrong

My love for you is now gone

It's now gone baby

© 2011 WynterInspired


Author's Note

WynterInspired
yeah i got writers block before i could get the second verse down and the bridge. i really dislike when i can't finish my songs. but i'll post up more new ones from the past that i've written. :)

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This is a perfect example of why I stopped writing songs lol they start off so well and then comes the writer's block!! I get writer's block writing my novels too, but for some reason, it doesn't discourage me like it did when I wrote songs. Anyway, sounds good so far, Gorgeous!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This is a perfect example of why I stopped writing songs lol they start off so well and then comes the writer's block!! I get writer's block writing my novels too, but for some reason, it doesn't discourage me like it did when I wrote songs. Anyway, sounds good so far, Gorgeous!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yeah this could work, but it needs another verse! For sure, nice start.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's a good start. Keep it up ^_^


Posted 12 Years Ago


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Added on August 31, 2011
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WynterInspired
WynterInspired

The Music Is My Lover, AZ



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well heres the dealio, i'm a songwriter/singer/lyricist/actor/dancer.:) My nick name is amber and my real name is something you ain't gotta know till i give you my name, i mostly write music when i'm .. more..

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