Nature

Dancing around

In the middle of a field

The bright sunlight

Hitting me in the face

I feel its warmth hitting my face

Then flowing throughout my body

I lie down on the soft grass

And i close my eyes

I listen to the chirping of the birds

And i feel the small bugs hitting my arms and legs

I feel shadows Swimming across my face.

I smile to myself

And think, oh how i love nature.

I open my eyes

Ad observe the clouds

Laughing at some of the shapes it forms

I smiled and enjoy this moment

I lie there in the grass

Surrounded but flowers of all colors

I day dream about life

About the futur and the Past

But soon, night comes along.

And the warmth is gone

The birds are sleeping

And all i can hear is the wind going through the trees.

I frown and get up.

I say goodbye to nature as i walk away

Hopeing for the next day to come

So i can go lie down in the same spot.

And enjoy Nature and Life <3

Reviews

[Justine Mclatchie]

i like this, really good :)

[PaperHearts]

I really liked this. You described everything so beautifully, and in such a universal way, which made it all the more enjoyable. There's no better feeling than the warmth of the sun hitting your face, and I thought that you expressed that really well. There were a few spelling mistakes here and there, but other than that, I liked this a lot. :) It makes me want to run outside and lie in my backyard! Haha, nice work,
~PaperHearts