A Poem by ilurvekinilaw

Um. Right. I suppose Mama would have a heart attack if she knew I posted something like this. XP


Let me divine

The distance between your n*****s

The times your Adam’s apple has bobbed

To the beat of my heart

The exact number of sweat droplets

On your upper lip

The angle of my mouth

As it latches on to the base of your throat.

The frequency of the undulations of your hips

Over mine

Let me divine

Your nooks and crannies

Your length and your width.

Forgive the inaccuracy,

The clumsy blunders,

For I am but a humble surveyor

Sent to measure

Rough terrain

With only my two hands

And overeager devotion

To help me.

© 2008 ilurvekinilaw

Author's Note

Woosh. Did I suck at this? Lol.

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I feel faint.

/me swoons.

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nope, I loved this! Amazing imagery and brilliant writing as usual. I find this sexy, but I have a certain like of the word n****e in general lol

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Iloilo City, Philippines

I'm not particularly fond of writing. I just see it as a cathartic way of purging myself (whatever that means). I prefer having total strangers comment on my work rather people I know. I have no idea .. more..


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