Haunted Thoughts

My first attempt at poetry

 

You haunt my thoughts,

Through my thoughts you move into my dreams,

Through my dreams you enter into my soul,

Through my soul you take over my body,

Through my body I do your bidding,

I seek, I hunt, I kill for the blood that haunts my thoughts

Author's Note

This is my first poem.....

Reviews

[Carolina Kel]

Any repetitiveness in this poem I think worked well. I think it flows well too.

[Georgia Gypsy]

I write vampire stories and this is how my character's feel to me. I will read this when writer's block hits(which happens from time to time!)
Great first poem though! I really enjoyed it!
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[London Calling]

It was a good poem, be carefull not to be too repetitive, I did notice that in this piece. But other than that, it was good. Keep writing! :)

[Fairy Tales]

well it sure was a great first poem. I enjoyed it. I hope you write more works.