Haunted Thoughts

Haunted Thoughts

A Poem by J.L. Gregg

My first attempt at poetry



You haunt my thoughts,
Through my thoughts you move into my dreams,
Through my dreams you enter into my soul,
Through my soul you take over my body,
Through my body I do your bidding,
I seek, I hunt, I kill for the blood that haunts my thoughts

© 2009 J.L. Gregg

Author's Note

J.L. Gregg
This is my first poem.....

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Any repetitiveness in this poem I think worked well. I think it flows well too.

Posted 9 Years Ago

I write vampire stories and this is how my character's feel to me. I will read this when writer's block hits(which happens from time to time!)
Great first poem though! I really enjoyed it!

Posted 10 Years Ago

It was a good poem, be carefull not to be too repetitive, I did notice that in this piece. But other than that, it was good. Keep writing! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago

well it sure was a great first poem. I enjoyed it. I hope you write more works.

Posted 10 Years Ago

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J.L. Gregg
J.L. Gregg

Pittsburgh, PA

I guess on the outside Im seemingly completely normal (whatever that is), but there is a part of me that is dark and sinister. I decided to try writing after I got laid off from my "normal' 9 to 5 jo.. more..


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