Mortal Legacy

Mortal Legacy

A Poem by J.L. Gregg
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This is a poem that is an extremely brief synopsis of the Mortal Legacy series. Im not a poet but Im trying to explore every aspect of writing. Enjoy.

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My Mother was an Angel
Daddy is a demon
There love combined
And made a little girl
Life was never normal
Torn between two worlds
Healing humans
Killing mortals
Fighting for the love of my Father
I would for eternity
Blinded by my need for a real family
I never saw how evil he was
Until he killed my little girl……..

© 2009 J.L. Gregg


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One editing suggestion: The third line, it would be "their" instead of "there." Other than that, I really enjoyed it. This would make an awesome story, especially in regards to what happened to the mother.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Well, it ain't perfect, but it definetely is an eye catcher. Very interesting. Would like to see more with this story line. Kudos.

Posted 10 Years Ago


WOW! I know how this feels, its like you and i have lived very similar lives. This poem is almost a mirror of my own relationship with my father.
You did a great job with it.
Though it is sad, I still enjoyed it.
k

Posted 10 Years Ago



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J.L. Gregg
J.L. Gregg

Pittsburgh, PA



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I guess on the outside Im seemingly completely normal (whatever that is), but there is a part of me that is dark and sinister. I decided to try writing after I got laid off from my "normal' 9 to 5 jo.. more..

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