My New Comment/Quote 58

My New Comment/Quote 58

A Poem by Im His Daughter

Abuse is equal to the pungent aroma of rotten fish left on a rad in a car, on a 4 day road trip. It stinks & needs a thorough cleaning to remove it & the effects from the scent left behind. If all else fails abandon the car/person & obtain a brand new car with that new car smell. New car smells always leave a smile on everyone's face!

© 2017 Im His Daughter


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I really liked the message behind this. It is a great metaphor for abuse and like you said if you can't get rid of the smell or abuse than you should leave instead of staying like so many other people do.

Posted 10 Years Ago


You've summed up abuse - it's rotten to the core!! If you can't end it, then leave!
Good message!!

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on August 13, 2013
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Im His Daughter
Im His Daughter

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(Sorry I don't read stories, chapters or books. I am not a critic either, I will only read poems. When I comment, I comment only on how it makes me feel. Promise no criticism here unless maybe a word .. more..

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