Miss you

Miss you

A Poem by Imogen.E

I love as much as a sister dear friend,
Our friendship had cracks but they quickly did mend.
That time at the beach where you found me a stone,
Shaped like a heart, with a dark silver tone.

Then last week you told me your moving away,
I'll think and think about every day,
How we laughed and we cried in each other's arms.
And how we shared the same quirks and we shared the same charms.

From the coast of Orlando please be thinking of me,
Ours names that we carved in that giant oak tree.
I'll see you sometime, we have meetings that pend,
I'll be waiting but truly, I'll miss you best friend.

© 2014 Imogen.E


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What a sweet heartfelt piece. Just beautiful! :o)

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Posted 10 Years Ago


Imogen.E

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much, I do miss my friend a lot!! :)
BlackRose

10 Years Ago

We all miss someone regardless of who they are living or passed. :o/ :o)
Beautiful, heartfelt piece :) x

Posted 10 Years Ago


Imogen.E

10 Years Ago

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
A well written poem. Thank you for sharing...:).........

Posted 10 Years Ago


Imogen.E

10 Years Ago

Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you like it :)
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

I did. You are welcome...:)......................
Wow for your age you write so so so so well. This is amazing and so sweet. Brings back memories of having something so pure and true as a friendship and pact between the person who understood you the most.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Imogen.E

10 Years Ago

Thanks for the review. I'm just quite upset that someone I'm so close too has to move away!
KeeD

10 Years Ago

You might be upset, but when you write about it we as readers don't see you as upset we see only see.. read more
Imogen.E

10 Years Ago

Thanks I'm really glad that I could just get it off my chest :)

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Imogen.E
Imogen.E

Salisbury, United Kingdom



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Hey, My name is Imogen, most call me Immy. I'm twelve years old and I live in England. I have one older sister who is fifteen and she means the world to me, I'd never wish for a another sister or b.. more..

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