life without you

life without you

A Poem by immyownperson
"

about the two people i lost

"

i lost you

but i knew what to say

to make you stay

but thats not what you wanted

that was obvious from the start

you want freedom not love

a fling not a commitment

it was hard but i forced myself to stop loving  you

but then i lost  her

the one friend

i could talk about  you to

she was my only best friend

and i lost her too

so now

 i am the lost one

drifting about without those two

who i love so dearly

what i wish to take back

those words i wrote you to darling

and tell you to stay to still love me

like i knew you never did

but i cant take it back

so here i am

drifting

in hopes of finding my way

back to the two i love

© 2012 immyownperson


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immyownperson
yes, no, maybe? please review

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touching and beautifully morose...i know this song too well. question left open but inferred....did you lose her to him? if so, double that pain...so sad. yes, definitely so, to answer your author's note

Posted 11 Years Ago


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