Incomperable

Something I enjoyed writing.

Incomparable

 

The night is full of light

And music

And screams

And a cold wind

Rushes trough the streets

Laughter can be heard in the distance

-drunken laughter.

 

Some call this hell,

But I know these streets well.

 And I know the pizza parlors

And the liquor stores

And the guy who plays the violin

Down by the Bay side,

-Near the Art center.

 

I know the cop

That looks the other way

if you’ve had a few.

 And I know your beauty too

And I know a good spot to see the stars

And how beautiful they are

-and I dare not compare them to you.

Reviews

[brigid]

this is beautiful. i love the contrasts..the first 5 lines throw you right in...enjoyed a lot.

[Inda]

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a great write. I really enjoyed reading it. I can tell that this was for someone really special. I love reading poems like this. I like the romantic bliss within this poem. Thank you for sharing. :)

[Inda]

Thank you for reading and reviewing, means a lot.

[Angie Diane♥♥]

You're welcome. :)