Accompanied

Accompanied

A Poem by Inda

Accompanied

 

Drew a line in the sand

-because I can.

Pissed you off because I could,

Did all you said I would.

Still, you’re here,

Afraid to live in fear,

Life on your own

is too lonesome.

So who cares if I scream and shout?

You have someone to complain about.

© 2013 Inda


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I liked the rhyme in this...and you describe someone who is so afraid of change they remain complacent and settled with where they are out of fear. Sad, the life that cirlces itself.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Inda

10 Years Ago

Thanks and yes that is a sad life.

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Added on August 16, 2013
Last Updated on August 18, 2013
Tags: Loveless, long relations, lack of passion.

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Inda
Inda

miami, FL



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