fragile aspirations

fragile aspirations

A Poem by Inda

No harm meant 
ain't no harm done.
apologies
won't mend a broken heart,
disappointment enters
 as an illusion departs.

© 2017 Inda


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You know, a broken heart ain't always a bad think. When a heart is whole there's much one doesn't understand. Besides, light can always enter thru the crack of a broken heart. :)

"disappointment enters as an illusion departs" that is so true... :'(

Loved the poem!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Posted 7 Years Ago


You know, a broken heart ain't always a bad think. When a heart is whole there's much one doesn't understand. Besides, light can always enter thru the crack of a broken heart. :)

"disappointment enters as an illusion departs" that is so true... :'(

Loved the poem!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow!
I agree! Forgiving is not associated with forgetting. You just need to fix it and heal.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Bullet write my friend! Sharp and to the point.

Nice write.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The subtlety makes this poem a nice one....!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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"Disappointment enter, as an illusion departs"

Now that's a great line. Nice poem, thanks for sharing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Inda
Inda

miami, FL



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