That first month alone

That first month alone

A Poem by Inda

By my lonesome self,
self hatred 
at an all time
high.
living for the night
-life a distraction.
filling pages
with
 carefully crafted
mistakes.

© 2017 Inda


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the pauses.....
add.....
emphasis---they force you to take the time to carefully weigh and consider what you're reading. ever contemplative as always I see my old friend. I see myself and inner dialogue splashed on this one for sure. I often wonder if life is just the distraction, or if i need distracting from life, either way my thoughts are a trap and an escape.. funny how that works, right? when left alone to your own thoughts and introspect, it is very easy to start being critical--- crafting the mistakes onto pages is definitely therapeutic for me, and hopefully for you as well.. concise, flows intelligently as always, and definitely something I relate to.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Inda

7 Years Ago

Hey thanks for the RnR! Glad you stopped by and cannot thank you enough for your kind words, hope al.. read more



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Very nice. Love this! The flow is great!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the pauses.....
add.....
emphasis---they force you to take the time to carefully weigh and consider what you're reading. ever contemplative as always I see my old friend. I see myself and inner dialogue splashed on this one for sure. I often wonder if life is just the distraction, or if i need distracting from life, either way my thoughts are a trap and an escape.. funny how that works, right? when left alone to your own thoughts and introspect, it is very easy to start being critical--- crafting the mistakes onto pages is definitely therapeutic for me, and hopefully for you as well.. concise, flows intelligently as always, and definitely something I relate to.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Inda

7 Years Ago

Hey thanks for the RnR! Glad you stopped by and cannot thank you enough for your kind words, hope al.. read more

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Inda
Inda

miami, FL



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I love fiction that's gritty and honest and so my stuff is often times like that. I don't have as much free time as I'd like, but i will get to the request in time and appreciate anyone who takes the .. more..

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