Addicted...

Addicted...

A Poem by Secondhand Tink
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It's sort of indescribable...but highly meaningful and I hope many people can relate coz it's just the greatest thing...

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Addicted, obsessed, caressed,

 

Your chest,

Your hands,

My neck,

Your lips,

 

I check, for more marks you've left on,

 

My back,

My sides,

My neck.

 

In this, falling, holding, jumble, we crumble,

 

To each other, wills break,

 

Words cannot describe, the restraint this takes,

 

The need, it grows, in long testing lows,

 

With highs, of lines, it binds, our hands,

 

Together, we rise, we fall, the rhythm,

 

Never ends, the addiction never quenched.

 

 

© 2009 Secondhand Tink


Author's Note

Secondhand Tink
^_^ one of my first poems in a long time XD

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That's a HOT write
I love it!
Nice joB!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great poem!!! Steamy. I love it!!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


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interesting
very interesting

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

-ponders- we'll see. I doubt they'd be much different to this one. Lolz

Posted 15 Years Ago


I love it. Fabulously written. First of many more...?

Posted 15 Years Ago


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shadowitis. it kicks a*s.

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Added on January 20, 2009
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Secondhand Tink
Secondhand Tink

London!!, United Kingdom



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I'm Nai, I'm 17 and I live in London. I love music, especially Avenged Sevenfold and tonnes of others =] My tastes range pretty wide. Obviously I love to write, I'm a bit slow though...so please b.. more..

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