suck it up, love

Viva

 

I need to believe you

But you’re so cunning

I want to just touch you

But your miles away

I’ve got to just say it

But it always slips away

 

There is a black whole

That swallows everything we always wish we said

Some hidden monster

Who whispers from the comfort of our bed

Eating the love we’ve unspoken

Taking it all away with token despair

 

I need your touch of affection

But I won’t ever call out for it

I get choked up

Ill walk away

Leave it for another day

That will always pass me by

Reviews

[The Mitmit]

There is a black whole,
That swallows everything I've always wish I'd said.
This above line seems to disrupt the rhythm.
Some hidden monster,
Who creeps from the comforts of my shadows.
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The message was conveyed well and I very much liked the imagery you used.