under a full mooon shining

under a full mooon shining

A Poem by bob, small b. aka invs
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dipping my toe back into writing. it's been a long time. be gentle with me.

"
under a full moon shining
she comes
riding a cloudbeam dancing
from hopeful heavens
to dream-muddled sleep

and i
full of the darkness between the stars
gobsmacked in awe
do tremble, leaf-like
watching her

under a full moon shining

© 2020 bob, small b. aka invs


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Hi, bob with a small b! Surreal imagery here, but interesting and poetic! It reminds me of some of my half-forgotten dreams, where I wake up with strange images still going round my head.
A pleasant read, for sure!

Posted 4 Months Ago


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LJW
Your use of the repeated line is effective.
I like the brevity and the simplicity.


Posted 1 Year Ago


a beautiful picture.. a will-o-the wisp.. something there but not quite corporeal enough to hang on to with earthly fingers.. I know the darkness between stars.. thank you for this..

Posted 2 Years Ago


bob, small b. aka invs

2 Years Ago

thanks so much for your kind words. i haven't written anything in a long time. this was my first att.. read more

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my name's bob. small 'b'. a hold-over from my e.e. cummings stage of writing. i just never went back to reclaim the capital B. or the capital letters to begin paragraphs and sentences. no significance.. more..

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