under a full mooon shining

dipping my toe back into writing. it's been a long time. be gentle with me.

under a full moon shining
she comes
riding a cloudbeam dancing
from hopeful heavens
to dream-muddled sleep

and i
full of the darkness between the stars
gobsmacked in awe
do tremble, leaf-like
watching her

under a full moon shining

Reviews

[Robert Haigh]

Hi, bob with a small b! Surreal imagery here, but interesting and poetic! It reminds me of some of my half-forgotten dreams, where I wake up with strange images still going round my head.
A pleasant read, for sure!

[LJW]

Your use of the repeated line is effective.
I like the brevity and the simplicity.

[olla]

a beautiful picture.. a will-o-the wisp.. something there but not quite corporeal enough to hang on to with earthly fingers.. I know the darkness between stars.. thank you for this..

[bob, small b. aka invs]

thanks so much for your kind words. i haven't written anything in a long time. this was my first attempt at something creative. i'm glad it worked for you.