Dreams

I thought of this one day and wrote it down

Dreams

I admit a night vision like no other.

Your face as if its an angels

No, more pure than them.

Your smile is deceiving but I even figured it out

Our lips meet for this first time.

Its like kissing smooth but warm velvet

It steals my breath and lingers as a drug

An addiction.

You explore my eyes with yours

Trying to envision my life, dreams, achievements, and wants

I mock this as well.

Your life is beyond mine

A fire, a loving mother, separate parents, and you seeing me at our educational institution

No love surfaced then as it has presently done

What did you note from me?

You brushed my cheek gently as if Im about to be destroyed by your strong hardworking hands

I dont fear them but I accept the touch

Suddenly, there is a blaring noise

Very annoyed, I gained consciousness and the first thing I saw was    YOU.

Reviews

[alesuriko]

Nice writing. Very simple and decently written. A few words don't seem to portray the emotions that I think you're trying to express. To be honest, I'm not sure what you were trying to say in many different lines, especially "A fire, a loving mother, separate parents, and you seeing me at our educational institution."
But don't worry, being vague isn't a bad thing if it was intentional. Especially with it being a dream poem, you don't have to be entirely clear because nothing is ever quite obvious in a dream.

[Kelsee]

Thank you, I don't write a lot so this poem surprised me with how many people liked it.

[PoeT4994]

Nice....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................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liked it.

[Dante Yurei]

Very beautiful poem. It was well writen and the free verse enjoyable. Seemed like a story! Good job, keep it up!!