Ive been thinking

Just a little something i made when i was sitting alone thinking about how much i think, as well as the state that my life is in and the state of our world.

I've been thinking

 

I have been thinking a lot lately
thinking about what we are all really worth
thinking about our hateful confusion
thinking about the pain of the earth.

Like a desert my mind is barren
a sad empty expance
I sit and watch everyone live
they never look at me when they pass

My heart is alone and my mind conflicted
I am a manifestation of the social model
Perhaps this is why I live in suspence
waiting for a friend to drop from the sky

I wish we could find ourselves
I wish we could find our minds
but we dwell in social barriors
and we may never learn to be kind

Ive been thinking we should defeat our programing
thinking that we should make our own reason
thinking we should consider love over hate
thinking we should live  together instead live in fear

Author's Note

This is my fiirst poem in a while so please dont be too critical on structure, rhythm or fundementals. This is pure emotion, so please read it for its meaning.

Reviews

[Catlen]

I like the pictures you have presented: a world of solitude and alienation instead of one of solidarity.
Nice choice of words. May I suggest a few things? You have written barriors instead of barriers and then you've missed an apostrophe in the next I've been thinking and then in the last line it should be instead of living.
Keep up the good work!

[isiah_holmes]

Thank you for the reveiw. And yes, i think my feelings and life situation emptied into this poem a bit. Im glad you picked up on it. And thank you for the comments about grammer, i will be do more to improve that in the future.