PSA

Speaks for itself

 

PSA

 

Like a cycle ending before dawn

Or the death of a mother deer

And the birth of its daughter fawn

Life is perfect

 

Never ending and in perfect unity

Always without true purety

Not only on earth

But throughout our cosmic community

 

I have seen the hate

And fear our societies fate

For it will all fade on a unnamed date

And for those who pray, it will be too late

 

Like myself, we should all seek love

Esspessially those who the mainstream denied comassion

Stop worrying about hollow eyed gods from above

And continue our chaotic unity riot in an orderly fashion

Author's Note

think about it

Reviews

[Aarea]

Hmmm, interesting. I liked it it made me think. It had a nice feel to it and I liked how you worded things. Great job!

[Bri 810]

I like the last line. It's an interesting piece. I'm not sure if I feel like the first stanza fits with the rest.

[Rachel_Biggs]

Not too bad, definitely made me think.