The Key Of C

just a short one for my debut to writerscafe. most of my writing is pretty angsty, this is no exception.

The key of C is haunting me,
if nothing's wrong, how
right is she? Pedestal
high above the new
jet stream, the
blind sea,
And me.

Reviews

[Aura Inanna]

This is very short but very powerful. It flows perfectly down to the last syllable, and I read it again and again without tiring of it. Truly wonderful work.