13, 12, 11, 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

13, 12, 11, 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

A Poem by coma black☯

13 people stuck in this room. 
12 secrets that have to do with you.
11 hearts that dying tonight.
10 lies that I'll never tell.
9 girls all lined up to hell.
8 boys that doesn't exist. 
7 angels that are twisted and mystic.
6 voices living in my head.
5 people crowding my bed.
4 children crying for more.
3 more tries before I throw you out of my head.
2 more lies before it's over.
1 of you. There's only 1 of you. 

© 2011 coma black☯


Author's Note

coma black☯
I got bored :P

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Really good, loved the count down.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I really like this. Great job

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like the use of thirteen numbers. Good use of each one. Thank you for sharing the poem. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


this was pretty damn brilliant for something you just threw together because you were bored. i liked it. it was weird and confusing but kind of beautiful at the same time, and sometimes thats good in poetry.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like it :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is really neat!

Posted 12 Years Ago


i loved it...

Posted 12 Years Ago


You got bored and created a masterpiece! fantastic write I loved how you took 13 surreal activities and lines and made them emit such powerful imagery very well done

100/100 from me

Posted 12 Years Ago


LOVE IT!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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