Will this pain ever go away?

Will this pain ever go away?

A Poem by Siobhan Crosier
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I've lost so many dear to me.... will it ever stop?

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When will this pain go away? 
Everything... 
All i see brings me back to you... 
When will this pain go away?
All i can think of... 
To stop this ache...
Would not help...
When will this pain go away?
Everytime i try... 
To forget the pain... 
It worsens... 
When will this pain go away?
Will it worsesn till i can no longer go on...
When will this pain go away?
Will i break down... 
Once more... 
Or should i fight it... 
When will this pain go away?
Ive lost so many others... 
Will you go on the list too...?
Will you?

© 2012 Siobhan Crosier


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Just, wow. I relate to this poem very much. It's so simple, yet this piece can go even deeper than it's words express. Like a hidden meaning. That last line seemed very haunting, if you would whisper that in the quiet of a room as it echoes and repeats the last two words of this.
I loved this very much. Keep it up!

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Just, wow. I relate to this poem very much. It's so simple, yet this piece can go even deeper than it's words express. Like a hidden meaning. That last line seemed very haunting, if you would whisper that in the quiet of a room as it echoes and repeats the last two words of this.
I loved this very much. Keep it up!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 30, 2012
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