My Love

"Her eyes glitters the same as the stars in the sky, i wonder why?...

Her dazzling smile shines similar to 'thousands of sun', which made me stun...

Her beauty made the moon to worry, if it is the end of its story..."

Author's Note

If there are mistakes then pls correct me. I'm new in writing poems. Write a review how you feel about my poem

Reviews

[Michelle Buckley]

There are no mistakes in poetry, only lessons in the art of writing. If you are still writing poetry, might I suggest you re-work the above piece as you are now! It is a nice piece of poetry that you have written, it would be nice to see which words you would change, don't add to it, just have a play around with the words you have written.