Twilight kissed

The end of the day

 

 

Twilight Kissed

By jack

 

O’ feelings of a twilight kissed

My cheeks they flush O’ brim

Peace doth calm my vision’d seek

As evening’s light grows dim

 

Pour of endless wonder seen

As time doth take its rest

Slowly tempered floating dream

O’ tangerine thy crest

 

Quick it doth dispense the day

O’ daylight last was found

Tempting every soul at place

Upon this shadowed ground

 

Abreast to stand a’ dreaming eye

Of fortunes far off cast

So long ago the morning lies

Mere memories O’ past

 

Thy scented air lies sweeter still

Than any we hath known

As but the final rays of light

This twilight birth hath shown

 

Sensual of highlight fare

Of life now born desire

To breathe thy ample perfumed air

And watch the day retire

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading. Photo taken out of the window of a jet on a recent flight home.

Reviews

[KAOlmsted]

This is such a beautiful write I'm not even going to roll my eyes at all of the doths and haths...nope. Not gonna do it. ;-)

Very pretty picture, too.

[Jack...]

O' come now Kimmer, Doth thou truly feel the need to roll ones eyes? Especially eyes that hath captured the essence of such beauty?

Thank you so much.

[KAOlmsted]

xD Priceless! Always my pleasure, good sir.

[InsanityWriter]

Beautiful to infinity. ;) Another superb poem! I loved it. ^_^ Excellent write. (:

100/100

[Jack...]

Your kind words lift me this morning. Thank you so much.

[InsanityWriter]

I'm always happy to read such beautiful works. ^_^

[being me]

twilight the part of a day that is most breath taking..neither light nor dark...and you have captured the feel through your words...

[Jack...]

Thank you once again for your kind comments.

[Angel of Heart's]

Oh Jack...this is seamless....what a beautiful write that sighs the soul from the first breaths through to the last inkdrop.....
Love the entire piece, beginning to end.....:)

[Jack...]

I am at a loss for words. Thank you so much.

[keyvan]

wow

[Jack...]

Thanks

[Holly Mason]

beautiful piece made me feel very relaxed for some reason
the photo is amazing what a nice view...made you forget about the tsa pat down..you know you got one you look highly questionable..hahha*)
thank you for sharing

[Jack...]

yeah they are alwasy so friendly in those security lines, yet so forgetable

[uzair zahid]

a very nice write...

[Jack...]

Thank you so much.

[Frieda P]

First off, the picture is a stunner, nice one. Of course your poetry is next to none. First class, it reminds me of 'midnight kisses' I wrote but yours has so much more polish and finesse as does all your work.. I have to find a word to replace 'lovely' but that's what always comes to mind when I read your work.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Frieda, your comment are always the highlight of my day.

[Frieda P]

As in your poetry to mine Jack...my pleasure always!

[Emerald Seas]

You have such a quiet eloquence to everything you write. It must come from a wonderful soul as there are few men that can write like this consistently. Swept into the imagery of the moment - your words took me away from this tiring week. Thank you for the lift, Jack!
Lovely, lovely write!

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Sera. Your kinds words have lifted me as well.

[Marie]

A beautiful picture and a beautiful poem. I can write about the sunset, and frequently do, but not that kind of poetry.

[Jack...]

Come on Marie, sure you can. Thanks

[Marie]

I run out of words.

[Jack...]

I'll lend you some.

[Marie]

You have a lot more than I do.

[Jack...]

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