Forever mine

Eternally, I will love thee

 

Forever Mine

By jack

 

Innocence, O’ heart of mine

I send to thee a tender kiss

Found within these words a’ rhyme

Flowing from my fingertips

 

Written soft, affection’s flare

O’ to touch your precious heart

O’er these words of love I share

Prayers that we shall never part

 

Bring thy smile to my gaze

Fill my life with joy divine

Within these words of love I pray

Your love shall be forever mine

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Emerald Seas]

Break out the wine, we're celebrating! One of these days you need to put all these glorious writings together in a collection and dedicate them to your muse. I know there's one that is at the heart of all these fabulous writings. Excellent!

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much my friend.

[s y e]

Ahhh Jack, this is so romantic! Absolutely divine.

You certainly know how to write thats for sure, so many wonderful lines and the imagery was amazing.

"I send to thee a tender kiss
Found within these words a’ rhyme"

Oooft, wow.

~ Noodle.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my friend.

[s y e]

Pleasure.

[Sami Khalil]

I felt like Shakespeare is alive and well or the puritans of old...Well done...:)

[Jack...]

Thank you Sami

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)

[Mark]

Nice work. It conjures images of a gentleman, a lady with a parasol on his arm, strolling a garden as he professes his feelings. The last line didn't quite fit the meter though, I wonder if you would consider 'Your love will be forever mine' ?

[Jack...]

Actually mark that is what it was and a changed it just a bit ago because I didn't like the flow. Perhaps I will change it back. Thanks so much

[Mark]

:)

[Jack...]

It is fixed.

[Frieda P]

'Joy divine', what a luverly thought, the picture is amazing, as is your romantic poem, always a sigh in your poetry Jack, not sure how you do it, this one lights the page in incandescent candlelight.

[Jack...]

Always I appreciate your kind words my friend.

[Rita L. Sev]

Shakespearean in tone, but much easier to understand! You write of love so eloquently, Jack!

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Rita.

[Holly Mason]

romancing our minds once more...
fill my life with joy divine...those feelings are the best
thank you for the dreamy romantic smile I now wear*)

[Jack...]

You are more than welcome Dear Holly...I appreciate your kind words always

[Holly Mason]

interesting pic as well...I picture them from two different places parents not knowing-that's why she is hiding her flowers*)

[Jack...]

Interesting perspective

[Holly Mason]

well that is how I am going to think of it I like the idea...*)
now I see aftermath-their parents found out uh-oh kidding