Butterfly Hill

Fly with me

 

 

Butterfly Hill

by jack

 

Standing out on butterfly hill

I felt the breezes blowing by

Cherished of this life I fill

Never need to wonder why

 

Wings of love they catch my dream

Singing as the sun does shine

Everything is what it seems

In the midst of butterflies

 

Colors dance as fluent so

Brilliant as the day does come

In this feeling I do know

You will be my only one

 

In the shade of sultry morn

As we breathe the silken air

This does feel the day is born

In this moment that we share

 

Come with me and know this place

Lone of distant whippoorwill

Meanings that we've come to trace

Standing out on butterfly hill 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Blue Ivory]

You describe ever so beautifully! Your words paint a picture in the reader's mind. I'll point out again, you're very good with giving off tranquil vibes.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much sweet Siren. It is nice to know that my words bring some comfort to you. I truly appreciate you.

[InsanityWriter]

Lovely. :)

[Jack...]

Thank you

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Lovely as always, it brighten my day reading your poem with a cup of coffee, truly a brilliant one. The poem has a good imagery and vivid vibrant feel on it. Thanks for sharing Mr. Jack always a worth piece to read.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Marc

[Veronica Chandler]

Enchanting piece which lifts my spirit I am so much lighter now that I have experienced this charming moment from your day. I always see the creatures who cross my path as messengers, and butterflys represent transformation. If this had been my day I would be preparing for profound transformation in some area of my life...and the transformation is one of beauty, strength and the sweetness of the nectar they consume.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much dear Veronica. I always appreciate your kind and enchanting words.

[icelandicblue]

Love is both beautiful and fragile like a butterfly. You capture and release this image with skill.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much. This day I am thrilled.

[Distant horizons]

Beautiful words jack

[Jack...]

Thank you so much.

[Distant horizons]

You're very welcome Jack

[Just Kim]

such a sincere wonderful write

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much

[Sam Gregory]

As I read this I felt thas this would sound really good recorded as spoken word, I can imagine scenes of what u describe on a screen as u perform this piece. That's some good imagery right there, nice one!

[Jack...]

Thank you so much.

[Sam Gregory]

Np :)

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a beautiful moment to spend with someone else; sharing that special moment with another person. I personally love to watch butterflies for they are so delicate and graceful.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much. There were a lot of butterflies in my yrad this weekend and that is what prompted the poem.

[Leigh]

It sounds like a magical place, I feel like your butterflies are a point from which our souls can lift off from, a sort of bridge. Your words have brought me closer to nature, which is a great feeling.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much. Happy you enjoyed it.