Debris collects in the corners
of my forced smile, - wow. That is a great line. This poem is as easily 'felt' as it is read. if that makes sense. the sadness is palpable.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you so much my friend. Nice to see you again.
familiar emotions, it clutches my heart so tight. Thanks God I am too tired right now to cry. Superb write sir!
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Well I am happy you are tired because I wouldn't want to be the one who caused your tears. Thank you.. read moreWell I am happy you are tired because I wouldn't want to be the one who caused your tears. Thank you very much.
Oh wow, Jack! This is such a moving, heartfelt write, has me blubbering like a baba. I felt this right to the core. Blew me away, Jack. Absolutely amazing.
My sweet, sweet friend, once more you thrill me. If you are not careful, all of the beautiful praise.. read moreMy sweet, sweet friend, once more you thrill me. If you are not careful, all of the beautiful praise filled words will have me buying a bigger hat before long. :) Thank you so much.
11 Years Ago
Ha, I just love your writes, you blow me away each time. :) It is all the truth, the pleasure was al.. read moreHa, I just love your writes, you blow me away each time. :) It is all the truth, the pleasure was all mine. :)
Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..