A Love is New

Love, what else?

 

A Love is New

 

 

A light shines

this beacon of truth, of hope,

sending forth its shimmering guide

when darkness falls…

 

~so lost to time~

 

a song is sung,

lifting to the heart, the soul

harmonies afloat the wind

in every step we climb…

 

~happily lost among~

 

flower blooms,

so sweet the scent, the charm,

painted in the color of nature,

their life a rising sun…

 

~somewhere beneath the moon~

 

a child smiles

without a worry, a care,

joy does fill its eyes,

life now begins

 

~in precious style~

 

a blue bird flies

upon the wind, the breeze

freedom claims its heart

in endless boundaries…

 

~before its eyes~

 

forms a view

within two hearts it learns, it lives

truth finds the dreams

eternal it shall be…

a love is new

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[lolawants]

very pretty, i like blue birds :)

[Jack...]

Thank you Lola

[Frieda P]

You have brought a smile to my face this morning with your whimsical poetry Jack.

a blue bird flies
upon the wind, the breeze
freedom claims its heart
in endless boundaries…

Your poetry lifts my spirits, this is light as air and sweet as a child's smile.

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Frieda. I was hoping you would like this

[Frieda P]

Much enjoyed Jack, this one just wraps around you and gives you a gentle hug.

[Todd Mc' Callough]

Very good use of words here. I especially liked the lines;

"harmonies afloat the wind
in every step we climb"

The words were very vidid, again you display another essence of strong love.

[Jack...]

Thank you George, for your kind words.

[Kenneth Compton]

Despite my cynicism and despite my current condition of heartsickness, you have made me remember the finer parts of love. Congratulations on a job well done!

[Jack...]

Wow, happy I could bring those memories back...thanks a bunch.

[Lily Finch]

I agree with Kenneth you always bring memories back. so I love to read your poems Jack!
well done sir !!!

[redflutterby]

Sigh.....new love is so beautiful. And you write it so convincingly!! ;-)

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much. I appreciate it.

[Baby Ricochet]

A sweet and romantic poem from our lover's bard extraordinaire. Why isn't this #1 on the pop list. Who do I yell at? I can be pretty Goddamn convincing. God I wish I could write like this. Awesome.

[Jack...]

My friend, you flatter me way too much, but that's ok if you want to. :)

[icelandicblue]

This is both delicate and sweet. You have a master's touch when describing the simplest joys that surround us.

[Jack...]

Blue, I always look forward to you visiting my work. Thank you so much.

[LadySoDivine]

A very gentle and emotional piece of work, much like all of your poems about love. Very well done Jack! :)

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much for your always kind words my friend.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A most delicate and beautiful, well doen, good read.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my friend. Happy you enjoyed it.

[Kristin Lee]

Beautiful. I like the happy, hopeful feeling this one inspires.

[Jack...]

Thank you Kristen. I appreciate it.