To tell you I love you

Because I do

 

To tell you I love you

 

 

To touch you is to know you

To hear you is to sing

To kiss you is my heaven

To know the joy you bring

 

To dream you is my reason

To find your scent so sweet

To walk with you forever

To feel your burning heat

 

To call out in the darkness

To watch the sun now rise

To know that you’re my only

To see it in your eyes

 

To listen so intently

To offer only cheer

To dance about the city streets

To find you standing near

 

To glance in your direction

To taste your fruited wine

To share with you eternal

To know that you are mine

 

To hold you every morning

To whisper oh so true

To say what I am feeling

To tell you I love you

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Kristin Lee]

Very sweet. Sometimes the simplest things say so much. Very well done, as always.

[Jack...]

Thank you Kristin

[LadySoDivine]

This is so very sweet! Always a pleasure reading your wonderful love poetry. Well done, Jack :)

[Jack...]

Thank you my friend

[InsanityWriter]

Beautiful and very sweet. ^_^

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much. I appreciate you.

[Frieda P]

I love this to pieces Jack, what every woman want to hear and feel....always a big sigh on the page from you dear romance poet, no one does it better than you. Hmmm, to the 'listen so intently' dubious but doable I guess! If Mark thinks you can civilize him, it must be affecting....Seriously, lovely as always!

[Jack...]

Thank you for smiling on me this morning. I do have to be careful, don't want to be branded as the man who changed BR, that wouldn't be a good thing. As far as listen intently, you'd be surprised at what you hear when you do...you might even hear someone's heart beating.

[Sami Khalil]

"To hold you every morning
To whisper oh so true
To say what I am feeling
To tell you I love you"
What every woman will love to hear and be serenaded by your talent Jack...Well done ...:)

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

You are full of the emotions of another's touch Jack. It is a treasure more precious then we can imagine. I feel it too for the first time and in this piece you describe it in flowing verse.

[Jack...]

Thank so much John. Stepping down the path of the non-sad.

[Baby Ricochet]

Ahhh. You might just civilize me Jack. It's a long shot, but it could happen.

[Jack...]

I wouldn't want to do that my friend, that would be no fun at all. Thanks.

[Shaun Payton]

Jack, absolutely wonderful. What a beautiful gift love is. You wrap it up with a big bow of blessed expression.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Shaun.

[Shaun Payton]

You are most welcome:)

[Mark]

Very romantic and eloquent. Full of brightness and love. Wonderful work!

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Mark.

[s y e]

Awww, this is so sweet, my friend. If only everyone felt like this in a relationship! The world would be a better place, in a way, ha. Beautifully written as always, it's gorgeous, Jack.

I have so many songs running through my head, while reading this. Make You Feel My Love ~ Adele is one of them... Heh.

~ Noodle.

[Jack...]

Well I am happy this made you sing. Sing loudly my friend. Thanks you so much.

[s y e]

Ha, believe I am. Just got told to be quiet as its 12am. xD

Welcome!