Beautiful Sunsets

What better way to send my love

 

Beautiful Sunsets

 

 

The end of the day brings such wonders to see

Drenched in the colors of love’s tapestry

Found on this shoreline encased in a bonnet of fire

 

Ribbons now cast on horizons define

Curvature banners upon a straight line

Blushing in images lost in your deepest desires

 

Whispering winds flow from far reaching seas

Sweet is their fragrance of ocean born breeze

Calming this message, caressing your skin comes to share

 

Delicate flowers abloom on the sky

Painting the clouds as they wander on by

Nature’s magnificent pastels in soft solitaire

 

Apricot wishes a part of the scene

Captured decisions at rest in your dreams

Bountiful visions now call you to visit their view

 

Only a day with such beauty is told

Sent down from heaven, your eyes to behold

Beautiful sunsets arrive just to say I love you

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Zahra]

A really exquisite piece with wondrous imagery and wording. Loved the way it flows.

[Jack...]

Thank you so much Zahra

[Raven Cedrone]

"Sent down from heaven, your eyes to behold
Beautiful sunsets arrive just to say I love you" - this was a beautiful ending to the piece.
Serene and beautiful! Makes me anxious to see tonight's beautiful mesh of reds, oranges, and golds.

~Raven

[Jack...]

I am so very happy you enjoyed this raven. Thank you so much for your kind words.

[TL Boehm]

Delicate flowers abloom on the sky
Painting the clouds as they wander on by

You spin such an image here. Its hot and dusty in NM....I long for clear water.

[Jack...]

Look in the mirror Tammy, you will find something much more beautiful than any sunset. Thank you so much.

[Angel]

Fabulous, Jack!
*sigh*
How I do love to watch the sun set overe the water.
Have you ever watched it from the beach in Califorina?
So much splendor God has lavished on this bit of rock...

[Jack...]

I have Angel, in Newport Beach and it is spectacular. Thank you so very much.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Another romantic dollop of love on a page filled with colour and majesty. I look forward to your photography as much as your poems Jack

[Jack...]

Thanks so much John.

[eglantine]

yes, I agree

[Jack...]

Thank you E.

[Baby Ricochet]

Lovely poem. Who doesn't love sunsets over the Gulf? Serial killers probably

[Jack...]

I don't know, I'm sure once or twice as they were dumping a body overboard they looked up and said, "ahh". Thanks my friend.

[Emerald Seas]

"Curvature banners upon a straight line
Blushing in images lost in your deepest desires"
GREAT lines, my friend! There are more of course, but I love the vision of the horizon that blossoms in my mind from these lines. Such a satisfying image of sharing the sunset with a love. Beautiful!

[Jack...]

Thank you so much dear Sera. Your words this morning make me smile.

[Frieda P]

If you continue to make me sigh all the time Jack, I'm going to lose consciousness whilst reading one of your luverly poems....you put the ocean and apricot wishes together and I'm all dreamy eyed.

[Jack...]

I like "Dreamy Eyed". What better way to be. Thank you so much my sweet friend.

[Rita L. Sev]

Delicate flowers abloom on the sky
Painting the clouds as they wander on by
Nature’s magnificent pastels in soft solitaire

What a fabulous view I see when I look out your window, Jack! Stunning images and color as always!

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Rita. Sometimes the views are very nice.

[Angi]

Beautiful, beautiful as always Jack. Does she know, yet?! Angi~

[Jack...]

Could be Angi, could be. Thank you so much my friend.

[Angi]

Fingers crossed! Always my pleasure, Jack.