I'll always love you

I'll always love you

A Poem by Jack...
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The title says it all

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I’ll always love you

Yes it is true

When you are happy

When you are blue

When you are sleeping

When you are not

When it is winter

When it is hot

Out on a picnic

Sitting inside

Swinging on swings

Sliding on slides

If it is raining

If we are wet

I’ll always love you

That you can bet

If in a sailboat

Or in a car

For a short distance

Or very far

Up in an airplane

Out in the blue

Whatever it is

I’ll always love you

If we are singing

If we just talk

If we are running

Just taking a walk

If we are old

If we are new

If in the middle

I’ll always love you

If in a poem

If in a book

If we are cleaning

Preparing to cook

If in the pantry

Home from the store

If doing laundry

Scrubbing the floor

If we are shopping

If we are done

If we are tired

Of all of this fun

And if we don’t

Or if we do

Whatever it is

I’ll always love you

 

 

© 2013 Jack...


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Jack...
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True love knows no boundaries it permeates all the aspects of our lives.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much Anne. Just hacing a little fun.
This would make an excellent message on the inside of a valentines card !

A very romantic & tender poem !

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thanks Tom. Really it was just a rhyming exercise for me, don't want to lose it. I have been writing.. read more
Tom

10 Years Ago

You certainly can Jack !
What a fun & charming way to show her that you're not kidding when you say *always* !! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much Lily. I appreciate you.
This is cute. And you will love her in a car, you will love her near or far... Out of the realm of moonlight and roses and into the realm of every day...cleaning, cooking, shopping...the things a life together are actually made of. A man who can whisper sweet nothings while he's helping with the dishes...now, that man is a rare treasure.


Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

I'll dry. :) Thanks so much my wonderful friend. I am happy you came by and enjoyed my poem.
Almost Seussian. An enchanting and endearing write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Thanks Pryde...just a little rhyming practice here.
"If we are cleaning

Preparing to cook

If in the pantry

Home from the store

If doing laundry

Scrubbing the floor

If we are shopping

If we are done

If we are tired

Of all of this fun"
Wow. Jack. Now you are moving from the romance to the husdand and wife duties. Women like to put their men to work not counting shopping too with the credit card...lol...A splendid read and write


Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

Oh no, did I do that?????? I might have to rethink this one. :) Thanks so much Sami.
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

Hahaha...You are welcome...:)

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Jack...

San Antonio, TX



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Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..

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