Tingle

 

 

 

 

Tingle

 

Melodies ~ ringing on soft cool winds,

dangling from tiny strings in metallic forms

Swaying in harmony with your smile

reflecting the mid day sun

in glimmering highlights of whipped cream whispers

on wings of stained glass dreams

 

For it was that day you kissed me,

for the very first time ~

(When buttercups blushed as I held them to your chin)

and my lips tingled, unending,

understanding this was more than just a touching of skin,

a melted meeting of two

 

~Music called to us from the branches above,

serenading our hearts in sweet blissful sounds

on soft grasses, fingers intertwined~

 

Your eyes, hypnotized me there, in that place

and you kissed me again…this one held

Passion breathing, love had found me

coiled about me and clung to me

On that day, unlike any other

I could imagine…I fell for you

 

Now as cool winds blow

and leaves cascade in multicolored waves

That wind chime, suspended from that old maple rings,

singing sweetly of that first kiss,

a musical remembrance of that day

of which no reminder needs due ~ for my lips they still tingle

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Anand Sehgal]

Swaying in harmony with your smile

reflecting the mid day sun

in glimmering highlights of whipped cream whispers

on wings of stained glass dreams ..
lovely lines :)

[Jack...]

Thank you so much my friend.

[Neon]

Love's the one one thing in this entire world that keep a man alive and helps it to live the rest part of the life beautifully with the tingled beauty of lips .. with pure soul of the body. Softness of lips's what lost us into a world of bliss and the coldness of body with warmth's what that keeps us alive with the Tangled beauty of love .. sitting with love with the dangled whisper of warmth sound into the ear of love... that pours the words of refreshment right into the heart of love...

Very powerful piece .. and I do believe that this's one of the best stuff ever that i've read from yer stuffs. Wonderful job, Jack.

[Jack...]

Sir, your kind words are always a gift to me. Thank you so much.

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

That is truly lovely! Nicely done! It is full of creative musings about your subject.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Josie. Happy you stopped by.

[Angel]

Remembering the first kiss...
Ahh, how sweet!

LOL, just what I needed, after the parade of witches, werewolves, mummies, and ghosts...all demanding candy!!!

Whew...thank goodness THAT'S over...

[Jack...]

I am happy you survived my friend. Your kindness to me is sweeter than any candy. Thank you so much.

[redflutterby]

Memories of a that first kiss....romantic and sweet.

[Jack...]

Hey there my good friend. Thanks so much. Did you have a good halloween night?

[redflutterby]

Not bad..relaxing after lots of trick or treating. Hpe you had a good night too.

[Jack...]

Still at the office for a few more minutes, but it hasn't been too bad.

[Diana]

Tingle down to the toes, I hope. I was left wondering what happened to the "other" who enabled this tingling...

[Jack...]

Oh she's there...you can't let tingle creators go...thank so much my friend.

[Diana]

Oh, great comment, Jack. Good to know.

[Sami Khalil]

"Your eyes, hypnotized me there, in that place

and you kissed me again…this one held

Passion breathing, love had found me

coiled about me and clung to me

On that day, unlike any other

I could imagine…I fell for you"

Those wonderful moments of first times too can tingle the senses and touch the deepest places in our souls. Love is magical so does this poem...Bravo

[Jack...]

Sami, your kind words thrill me tonight. Thank you ever so much my friend.

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Sorry I got busy today...Happy Halloween...:)...

[Ruth]

And forever does that remain, Jack...to read you is a blow of radiant, fresh, warm air x

[Jack...]

Thanks you so very much sweet Poppy. Always you make me smile.

[Ruth]

And always my pleasure x

[icelandicblue]

We are forever imprinted:

singing sweetly of that first kiss,
a musical remembrance of that day
of which no reminder needs due ~ for my lips they still tingle

This is just so very touching and sweet. The most beautiful moments echo in our bodies and in our souls.

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Anne. I am thrilled you enjoyed this.

a musical remembrance of that day
of which no reminder needs due ~

Frieda helped me with this and those two lines are hers.