Breathing

Taken for granted?

 

 

 

 

 

Breathing

 

I breathe

as if it means nothing,

no thought or planning

A rhythmic thing

that just happens

 

~in and out…silently~

 

Little notice is taken

until I find your smile,

your beauty, your love

and then I gasp, for in that instant…

I am breathless

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Jack...]

I think you're pretty zen here Jack.... which is beautiful....
No pain, no happiness, just nothing for a while....

your words give the calmness and
easily make me breathe too on the musical notes in here.

Your last stanza says it all... through your veins,
no blood flows, but love :)

I enjoyed this marvelous piece, thank you!

- Elisa

[Jack...]

Thank you so very much Elisa. Your sweet words on my work always take my breath away.