Posies' Bloom

Posies' Bloom

A Poem by Jack...
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Posies’ Bloom

 

Yon charcoal skies, horizon’s shade

Warm the breeze on flowing hair

Skin of whispered poet’s phrase

Dreaming of a heart to share

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Alone you stand in posies’ bloom

Blinded by the purest love

Fragrant as this rose appears

On the wings of windswept dove

 

 

© 2014 Jack...


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Jack...
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Just a superbly beautiful write. Love the imagery.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Jack...

6 Years Ago

Thank you Pryde. Always I am thrilled when you visit.
Just lovely *a billion sighs* Genius, to say the very least. Had to add this to my favorites!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Jack...

6 Years Ago

Thank you Gleb. Thank you so very much, this poem was very special to me.
The poem is lovely, and so is the picture.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Jack...

6 Years Ago

Thanks so very much Marie.
// Skin of whispered poet’s phrase
Dreaming of a heart to share //

You have me swooning here my friend. You know, there is no one who can write like you do, no one who can be as romantic as you, you're my Jackomantic and ain't no one gonna beat you. ;-) I loved this one, so romantic as always.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Jack...

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Sye. I am happy you liked this as it is a special one to me.
skin of whispered poet......
wow what words!
simply hats off sir!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Jack...

6 Years Ago

Thank you so very much my friend.
junaid altaf

6 Years Ago

your welcome
Beautiful flow and word play. Great work Jack!

Posted 6 Years Ago


You captivate your reader with words abd beautiful imagery and you captivate her with your immense love and passion...Excellent...:)................................

Posted 6 Years Ago


Jack...

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much Sami. This felt so good to write.
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

Beautiful...:).........................
beautiful Jack I enjoyed it

Posted 6 Years Ago


Jack...

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Latifa
A nice, flowing, captivating verse. I would be tempted to add an "A" before the windswept, but I am impossible, as I follow neither form nor flow nor rules of meter and tempo, just GUT.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Jack...

6 Years Ago

Thanks KL, but this one to me needed to flow. I did originally have "A" in there, but it didn't feel.. read more
This has such a nice flow to it. It was a pleasure to read.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Jack...

6 Years Ago

Thank you Brittany for your kindness this morning.

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Added on January 23, 2014
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Jack...

San Antonio, TX



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Not much to tell about me, I am just Jack, I am a poet, a writer, a musician, a painter, a builder and a dreamer. I live in south Texas but am originally from New Jersey and miss it more and more all .. more..

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