Ocean's Fury

Just bored.....

 

 

Ocean’s Fury

 

Clouds of fire on the sky

Furious the swelling sea

Depths below do call my name

O’ say what shall become of me

 

Rocked aboard this flailing ship

Danced about the angry waves

Let me find the light of day

Let not this ocean be my grave

Author's Note

Thank you for reading

Reviews

[Kylie]

A powerful read, Jack. Wow, you sure know how to rock someone's boat!

[Jack...]

Thanks so much Kylie. Now you have me singing..."Rock the boat, don't rock the boat baby"

[s y e]

Oh Jack, this was powerful and superb. It was short but to the point. That last line is a killer. I loved it all, you always write with everything you got and pour your heart onto the page. This poem speaks volumes my friend, and is extremely relatable.

I think you blew me to Texas my friend! Blew me away.

[Jack...]

Thanks Sye...just kind of wrote itself while I was sitting here. Hope you don't get seasick.