Fire

Fire

A Poem by Jackson Lai
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Smoke of the fire!!!!

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Fire,

A thing,

Many colour,

It can kill you,

 

The colour of the fire is yellow,red or green,

Fire can do good things,

And bad things,

Fire help you when you can't see in the dark,

 

Fire help you to get warm.

Fire can burn things,

Fire can be in bulidings burning,

Or in the graveyard.

 

I don't like fire,

because it could kill people,

But someone like it,

because they like killing people.

 

Good and bad,

Which one is the best,

I would like the good one,

What do you think?

© 2012 Jackson Lai


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This is a real nice poem to write
well done
keep going :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Jackson Lai
Jackson Lai

Hong Kong, China



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