There is a girl

A girl... who just.

There is a girl

　

There is a girl

A girl fighting

Fighting to live

Fighting to be free

Fighting...

To be happy

 

There is a girl

A girl looking

Looking for happiness

Looking for someone to hold

Looking...

For love

 

There is a girl

A girl who

Who wishes

Who dreams

Who...

Imagines

 

There is a girl

A girl who fights

A girl who looks

A girl who

And that girl,

Is me.

Author's Note

This girl, she speaks from the heart ;]
All feedback is good :] so please review

Reviews

[A.r. Bazian]

this is a Lyric... i like it!
i really do!

[(:]

I love this, Jade:D

[José Humilde]

Nice piece! Very easy to follow, I liked where how you used your lines to help kind of build...
suspense.

haha. I think there are a few things you could do to fine tune it and make it stronger.

A girl who
who wishes

That kind of threw me off the groove. I don't know exactly what to suggest, maybe just putting in a different word, rather than who (after girl).

And I just have a question on your last stanza. What are you trying to get across with "A girl who?" I would think about adding imagines, or dreams after that.

Thanks for sharing!

-JH